I think your boards are organized very well. The site plan is integrated well, background is subtle and drawings are well grouped. I would suggest one larger perspective (moneyshot). All your drawings are quite static to one another; if your best drawing was larger in order to highlight it, it could draw initial attention to your board, it then invites people to continue exploring. I'm no expert...just my thought
p.s.... your painting is pretty sweet... I would pay you to do one for me... with 5 shades of light and dark grays... with like 2 or three orange squares mixed in. (My preference would be minimal color) I'm thinking it would look pretty sweet!
Great graphic quality of your boards! Its a little hard to read from a distance, but your use of wood was communicated well.
ReplyDeleteI really like how much your parti came through in the overall design.
ReplyDeleteUsing the wood as a background to your board was very creative idea. I also love your hand drawings, and the painting you used as your parti.
ReplyDeleteI think your boards are organized very well. The site plan is integrated well, background is subtle and drawings are well grouped. I would suggest one larger perspective (moneyshot). All your drawings are quite static to one another; if your best drawing was larger in order to highlight it, it could draw initial attention to your board, it then invites people to continue exploring. I'm no expert...just my thought
ReplyDeletep.s.... your painting is pretty sweet... I would pay you to do one for me... with 5 shades of light and dark grays... with like 2 or three orange squares mixed in. (My preference would be minimal color) I'm thinking it would look pretty sweet!
ReplyDeleteyour board layout is dope yo. haha. no its a really well put together board layout i suck at boards nice job sara
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